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sg1008
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Gravedigger
Gravedigger
I was bare I was lonely
but not all alone,
and I waited patiently
for you to come home,
then the yarn was unwound
you called me to say
that you don’t see the pleasure
of coming any day.
So I cried and I wondered
what else could I do?
you had promised me pleasure
and my heart set on you.
Then the door rang, I answered
it was an old man
he said "someone is waiting
down gravel-street lane."
And he took me by hand
and led me away
and he said "there’s a fellow
who turns in his grave
who was waiting in shadows
for someone to come
who was buried in hollows
of logs and dirt scum".
So I tarried and shoveled
and dug up the grave
never questioned or wondered
if it was okay.
Yet I felt there’s no harm
in digging a hole
even if old man’s a liar
and I was a fool.
So I went on with working
and hoping to see
what the treasure was hidden
beneath our four feet.
And a moment came when
I realized the joke
that I dug my self in
a deep hole with no rope.
And the old man stood over
and laughed down at me
he cackled and hollered
"how thick could you be?"
I stood solemn and sadly
awaiting his hand
he would not bend to help me
though I'm sure he could have.
So I sat in despair
and cried in my grave
I had put my self there
with no one to come save.
But a clever idea
popped into my head
and I dug a bit deeper
a niche like a step.
I had created something
to help me get out
and I felt quite accomplished
to climb to the top.
I dusted my clothes off,
walked towards the old man,
and I looked at him closer
then stretched out my hand
and we shook on the deal,
I would not go back home
for I found a new zeal
to keep carrying me on.
So there was my story
and how I survived
even though I was lonely
and left there to die,
For I'm the gravedigger
I dug my own grave
and when I cried for help
it was I who would save.
And if you're ever lonely
and feel left to die
you can count on the old man
to tell you a lie.
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
This post was last modified: 08-03-2012 08:04 AM by sg1008.
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sg1008
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RE: Gravedigger
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
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Phillip J Fry
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You play the guitar or any instruments at all sg1008 ? I can see you doing this like in the style of those musicians who did the song, Scarborough Fair
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sg1008
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RE: Gravedigger
interesting that you ask- I actually wrote this to a tune...(a repetitive tune lol). I don't play but I make music in my head all the time
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
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| 08-03-2012 06:50 PM |
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Phillip J Fry
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I also created a tune in my head, well something close Scarborough Fair, to this poem... But I like having ADHD and having music stuck in my head cause then I can mix them up or rewrite the songs
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sg1008
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RE: Gravedigger
Powerful message!
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
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sg1008
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I also created a tune in my head, well something close Scarborough Fair, to this poem... But I like having ADHD and having music stuck in my head cause then I can mix them up or rewrite the songs 
cool! didn't see your reply until now
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
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| 08-03-2012 09:37 PM |
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MikeSilva
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I really enjoyed the read. And it ended with the "best" message I could have hoped. Excellent, if I do say so myself. Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully,
Mike Silva
With now a means of leaving this world, we take strength in the bonds we have forged with our friends. My name is Mike Silva, and I send this message. Though we did not choose to leave the Earth, it would seem that we are not to stay. If you approach this solar system with hostile intent, know this: We will defend ourselves. We will defend all species. We will defend... our galactic traversing home."
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Oh, how much I love this.
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| 08-22-2012 12:07 AM |
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sg1008
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Thanks for reading
Mirando, Ratatat
Strange women lying in ponds distributing swords is no basis for a system of government.
My autism acceptance sig was too big and broke every single thread.
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