i like it
you have tried to make tales, it's beauty, it seems you like very much to describe the senses and feelings
Confusing is a, imho, read tread through this poem.
You are writing symbolic
That was relaxing to read
Beautiful. Your imagery is amazing; rich and emotive. "It speaks to me in silent splendor..."
.... but then he gets an idea. He goes for a stroll past his favourite place. He notices how many discarded butts are there from people getting off the train. He reaches into his pocket, and pulls out a plastic sandwich bag and as quick as lightning he pulls all the still smouldering cigarette buts into the sandwich bag, stuffs them in his pocket and starts walking .............
Um...micgrace...it kinda looks like this is ichtms' story...
I couldn't help myself. Yes he has quite an imagination. One can guess what used to happen in English class at school I'd wander off in my own direction in the middle of a daydream.