Aspies For Freedom

no empty spaces here
tyranny of expression
speech speech
let us hear what you think
open  up your mind
to the blind

no silence admitted
preponderance of sound
scream and shout
let us know you exist
throw out bait for the fish
and a hook for the blind

No individual goals now
enforced social structure
team spirit
let us know you care
slip into our sphere
with a hug and a hook for the blind

No madness allowed here
put down the knife
blood frenzy
let us live
escape from our grip
with a siren and a hug and a hook for the blind

bunyip, this is not a comment on your poetry, but according to a web poll I just found (if you google "wrong planet" it's near the top) there's only a 1.2% posibility that you exist.

I don't know what to think!

thank you, I don't see what that doesn't have to do with the poem.  Did you know that 98% of your body used to burn in a star?  That is, if you actually do exist. :wink:

Ah that primordial hydrogen! So fundamental...

those five or six who have passed by here do realise that the changes are improvisations and not to be considered mature works.

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Ah, nice poem! A bit angsty for my taste, but a lot better than most of the poetry I've read. Good!

the progressively more disturbing chorus is clever.  i am trying to remember which songwriter that i like it reminds me of.