Aspies For Freedom

i had an anime idea that came to me in a dream and i need some criticism as to making it better and some people to help design it. i already designed the plot (well, Daniel did..) and got the names down.. just need some character designs for whoever thinks they can help. i don't rerally have any rules for how they should look like, but do as best as you can. here's the plot

my brain plus Daniel Wrote:

a normal guy, Takehiko Yuudai, has somehow found the way to another reality that he can only enter through his dreams where heaven (天) and hell (地獄) are battling off, and he gets involved. he has been assigned a guardian angel, Amaterasu Kotone, by the Council of Light to protect him. this only happens when he is asleep. when he is awake, he lives a normal life, but he has to keep the world under wraps in which he can only tell his close friends, though his friends think he's schizo.

yeah, pretty long post.. Tongue again, looking for any good anime artists and/or manga designers. SAYONARA!

It needs to be less generic and more developed on the real side especially. I mean, how can the real world affect any part of the action? If nothing, it has no point. Sorry, but it's very unfocused seemingly.

like i said, it's always up for editing

apologize for the double-post (lack of edit button)

should i just redo the whole plot to either make it better or worse? all up to you guys.

I think the story is good enough, but I'll explain to you the cool idea I have.

wow.. this thread didn't go so well.. Sad

btw, i set up some forums, so if you want to check them out, i'll post a thread in the Personal Websites thing. i shall link when i post it.

okay, the thread is made

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