Aspies For Freedom

ok, this is like the worst poem i've written not really, but lets just say it isnt my best work. I just like the ending

I wrote a poem called "(you know who), the f***ing ***"

Why haven't I thawed yet, but my heart still burns.
Why am I still unable to budge
with all my regrets and one big grudge.
Why havent I blossemed and bloomed
despite knowing that im no longer doomed.
This was supposed to be over
forgive and forget
but I still HATE him, he still needs to DIE!
For all my sleepless nights and the tears that i cry.
Im still frozen in time, I cant move on.
My mind is stuck.                                                              
Remember the mascara running down my face?!
All those years I was a living discrace?!
Remember every sniff and sob!?
The result of my life being robbed!
6 years of my life are gone, eaten up, robbed.                            Everyday I thought of giving up....                                          
(screams)*YOU'RE SUCH A F'ING ***! YOU ARE A MONSTER! IT WASN'T MUCH BUT YOU

RUINED MY LIFE!!!!

I hope you have a horrible painful death like I did.
F*** you (you know who)*

Forgive and forget
but I cant just yet, I still can't budge                                                   with all my regrets and one big GRUDGE!

Considering the amount of anger and profanity, you actually got some pretty clever bits in there.

I like "it wasn't much, but you ruined my life."  I would quote that.

thanks, and yes i know there is alot of swear words. But calling him those things doesnt even begin to describe him. It is an understatement at the most.

That is powerful emotions soocer :!:

I like it.

Oh swear words probably have their place in poetry.  and definitely there are people who deserve no better than those words.  what i meant was that profanity could let a person forget to have any literary substance, just show anger as if you were talking, but that you got some clever wording in there, too.