Aspies For Freedom

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NATURE THROUGH THE WINDOW!
As I look through the window, I see the clear blue sky.
As I look through the window, I see people walking by.
As I look through the window, I see best friends holding hands.
As I look through the window, I see adults pushing prams.

but then.....

I go outside to see
The children playing happily.
As look up I see butterflies flying round my head,
As I look round I see the birds eating bread.
I can hear nothing but,
peace and quiet as if the world is shut.
I look up at the sun
Oh! and how bright it is shining.
The birds are singing their song
While the children are skipping along.
There is a slight breeze in the atmosphere
and now I feel a tear
roll down my face
because I'm happy to be in this place!
A tear of thankfulness.

I am now walking down a bit until I get to the sea,
It is crashing and bashing against the rocks
I can see the reflection of me.

The scenery is amazing,
now I am gazing
at the nature in the world right now
I am happy here I know it!
Somehow!

By me! Colette Hughes

:lol: :roll:
I really like the images of the poem-particually the sun one.
Could be more original though. But overall, not bad.
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