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This poem is about me.

You, and more of You,
You brought light in my darkest hour,
I was falling into a grave,
Until you came,

You, the goddesses of angels,
You are my ultimate desire,
You are my everything,  

You have everything I ever wanted in a woman,
Same hobby’s, same nature, same everything,
Your face, your body shines like a star in heaven.

You brought me to heaven to let me exceed my most ultimate desire,
Will you fulfil my most ultimate desire,
Will you give me the kiss of love,
That one time feeling that never goes away.

That moment, the moment of love,
At that moment I am struck by an arrow of your love mark,
A mark signed and incurved with your passionate love.

I hope you will give me that love,
Please let me shine like nobody has ever shined before you.  
Let me cast my love on you, Let me touch you as I wanted too.

Share my pain with you, Share my love with you,
Please let me show you how much I care and have love for you,
Let my body tremble by the sight of your presence.

Yours truly,

Noman Nescio
Good poem.  I quite enjoyed it.
That was good :happyjump:
Thx both of youSmile
I like it very much Nescio.
It is writing to a girl i loved. But funny how things go, she has some other guy :evil:. It's the most beautiful poem i have ever writing.

Funny thing is i've send it to a lot of people in my friendslist. Many are girls. But also NT-ers have problem with not getting the poem. They say something like: Mwuah it's ok but not that good. And then i am thinking: It's a beautiful poem, can't you see that. But some can't. Or they say something like: It is a heavy poem. Thats something i can use. That i can understand. But that other thing about not so good. Those people haven't got a feeling for it maybe.
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