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This will be my second-to-last post, a going away poem.  I am very thankful to all of those who wanted me to stay, including very touching personal appeals from *BOTH* Lucie1 and Rossco!  I did not expect that dual appeal, and it truly made my day worthwhile.  I feel as though I can leave as a class act, less because of recent incidents and more because I really do need to get a move-on for the next phase of my life, one that does not involve spending so much time in a chat forum.  I can leave without loose ends, wishing both Rossco and Lucie1 the best of luck in their lives.

I want to share a poem that I wrote in September of 2005, before I write my final piece for this forum.  It was a time in my life in which I felt very boxed in.  I did not know about "HFA" Autism during that time.  Thus, the feelings that I expressed in the poem could only be expressed through poetry, and not through self-knowledge.  It is about getting older.  It is a sad poem, but a hopeful one.  I share it with you out of a sense of hope, not despair:

"When I was a boy so full of the red
      of sunrise peering through the branches,
    the keyhole of youthful vigor, a breeze
          carried me to the open road
             so beloved of Whitman and every
    boy who has not fenced himself in by
       fear, boredom, comfort, love, hate, death or life,
the road that carries imagination faster
  than the body, the body higher than the imagination,
          the spirit like the wind that blows
    through the keyhole of youth,
       an open road that does not offend
  as Whitman offended, but simply
   beckons without commanding,
       an unpaved road that itself travels
    in the open;
         it cannot stand still for anyone,
      that is its genius, not for today, tomorrow, or yesterday.
                And that is why I never
      traveled it.
                Nor can I find it now.
         Only the keyhole of youth remains,
       with the breeze going fainter,
           the light growing dimmer.
     Only the hope of the road returning
         remains, the keyhole, the breeze of youth."

I wrote that poem years ago.  I am happy to report that I can feel that road returning, in my heart at least.

All the best.
Great poem. Kind of reminds me of my daughter and her attachment to poetry and art for self expression.
darn, I shall miss your pure and good spirit ATM.
Thanks for sharing your poem!

So long and take lots of care.
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Thanks for the priviledge.
Well mate there is another PM I have just left for you.
If you do wish to go you have my best wishes and if you stay you have my support.
Not too bad.  Reads a bit too much like prose with funny spacing for my liking, but then I'm a meter nut.

Ciao then, ATM.
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