05-08-2008, 01:58 AM
I have an idea for a story and want to write it. The only problem is that it might not be good. The story is supposed to have magical stones called Imagilae, but their not going to be the main central point of the story. It's got to do with love, betrayal, and the Inquisition during the 13th century. Here's my idea:
In a medieval setting there lives a boy and his younger sister. Even though they remember their faces, their parents are dead, and the two sibilings live with their grandfather. The only thing that the sibilings have that is a memento is a glamourious stone inside a locket. Later on while the boy is doing errands around town and returns he find a young female talking to his grandfather. The girl says that she just arrived in town and that she's a chamber maid working for his grandfather. THe young girl and the boy do get on a rough start, but after a while two mysterious witches attack. The boy and young girl defeat the witches at the cost of destroying the house. knowing that the girl can use magic, the boy asked her if she was a witch herself. She replies that she's a witch, and the reason that she came here was to get the stone that the sibilings have. She tells the sibilings that they should go with her, otherwise the church would get them. They accept the agreement, and together they go on an adventure, battling the bad witches, dfending themselves from the church, and eventually meeting a young woman who has the same stone embedded in her back shoulder. The woman has a role that is very important later in the saga.
I'm thinking up more parts of the idea, but I need to know whether the idea is good.
In a medieval setting there lives a boy and his younger sister. Even though they remember their faces, their parents are dead, and the two sibilings live with their grandfather. The only thing that the sibilings have that is a memento is a glamourious stone inside a locket. Later on while the boy is doing errands around town and returns he find a young female talking to his grandfather. The girl says that she just arrived in town and that she's a chamber maid working for his grandfather. THe young girl and the boy do get on a rough start, but after a while two mysterious witches attack. The boy and young girl defeat the witches at the cost of destroying the house. knowing that the girl can use magic, the boy asked her if she was a witch herself. She replies that she's a witch, and the reason that she came here was to get the stone that the sibilings have. She tells the sibilings that they should go with her, otherwise the church would get them. They accept the agreement, and together they go on an adventure, battling the bad witches, dfending themselves from the church, and eventually meeting a young woman who has the same stone embedded in her back shoulder. The woman has a role that is very important later in the saga.
I'm thinking up more parts of the idea, but I need to know whether the idea is good.