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First story I have made. Came from a idea that just popped in my head.
Note: this story switches from 1st person present-tense to 3rd person past-tense, just like Robert Cormier's I Am The Cheese.
(Will update with new chapters.)

Today

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Today I heard that there was another report of violence at my school, it had to have been the 5th report i've known about this week. I've also heard the Head of the school has begun a crackdown on this "mindless pain" with backpack and binder searches and tremendously long and mentally painful interrogation. It happened to me just yesterday when they found books such as To Kill a Mockingbird, The Catcher In The Rye and other controversial publications, along with nonfiction titles on gun control and debates about the prison system.

TAPE1 04 22 08 BEGIN
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HE: Timothy Johnson, why is there this obsence filth in your backpack? Do you even know what goes on in these books? It's ungodly hate! Do you hear me?
TI: Yes, mam...
HE You better get these burned or mulched before you get expelled, got it?
TI: Yes...
HE: Now get out, now! I will call you up later.
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END TRANSMISSION
This looks good! And btw; welcome to the Forums!

Tomas
Greetings and Salutations to ye, Will.

Definitely some interesting potential in that story.
Thankies!Big Grin

New chapter.

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TAPE2 4 23 08
HE: Thank you for coming back, sir.
TI: You're...wel...come...
HE: Don't start off like a lazy mouse!
TI: It's just that I have Asperger's Syndrome, which causees me to zone out, and i'm not that good with talking to......
HE: ....I don't give a crap what syndrome, disorder, or -ism you have!
The important thing is, were are those books?
TI: I still have them.
HE: You little...
TI: I do believe I have the right to read these books and the authors have the right to write them, rig..
HE: This is SCHOOL! You only have to right to remain silent here, you got it?
TI: No, I don't.
HE: You better darn as well! You shut your little "bla bla I can do whatever" mouth right now sir! You are a rebellious twit with no respect for authority, you got that? You are a stupid teen with nothing better to do then read this filth! What is wrong with you?
TI: What's the problem with peace, love, understanding, and free thinking?
HE: .......
END TRANSMISSION
New chapter. 3.
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TAPE3 4 24 08 BEGIN

HE: .....you know that that the next cocky thing you say will get your darn butt kicked out of here, right?
TI: Sure. Take your time.
HE: ....
HE: ....YOU GODDARN CHILD! YOU HAVE PULLED THE FINAL STRAW WITH ME YOU GOT THAT!?...
TI: I thought there were a few more. But like i've been told, everything you say is final, right?
HE: stupid little.......
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TAPE=1  4 24 08  BEGIN
TI: ....I wonder why the Head's so stern and inane, Eric.
ER: I know. It's not like someone killed one of her family members. Where is she anyway?
TI: Most likely planning what torture she's planning on me next.
ER: Well, looking in the office I found shattered plastic and cassette tape reels.
TI: She went crazy and destroyed the tape recorder. At least I have my small tape recorder with me. I was also recording what me and her were saying without her knowing.
ER: That's a good thing. Mabye you could turn it in to the cops.
TI: Nah. Sometimes you should do things yourself. They may side with the Head anyway, saying what I said caused her a lot of stress. Sure.


HE: TIMOTHY AND ERIKSON! COME HERE NOW!



ER: Oh crap.


end transmission

Interesting start to that story...
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